Curse(first draft)
1 INT. HOME
Fade in:
We can see a man
is doing something strange. The light is very dark. He is writing some Taoist
magic figures, to burn incense, praying on his lips...
2 INT. HOTEL
A big bed in the
middle of hotel’s room. The man is sitting at the foot of the bed and smoking.
We can see a woman(call her S below) behind him, lay on the bed, wrapped in a
quilt, looks very sluggish.
3 EXT. STREET(OUTSIDE OF THE HOTEL)
The man and S walk
out of the hotel. We can see them from far away. Man’s hand put on S’s
posterior, looks very intimate. He is saying something to S, but we can’t hear
that. Then the man pats S lightly, they separate.
4 INT. DRAWING ROOM
Man’s girl friend
(call her N below) is sitting on the sofa and watching TV. Actually, she is
absentminded.
At this time, man
is back. He walks to the fridge and takes a bottle of beer. Then he sits beside
N, drinks the beer and watches TV.
N (still watch on
TV, looks deadpan): Where are you going this morning?
Man: GYM.
N: GYM? I guess
you have some exercises on somebody’s bed, am
I right? Why don’t you fuck her in my house? Fuck you! You
bastard! How dare you lie to me? (when N curse the man, he just drinks the
beer, didn’t say anything)
When the man
finishes his drink, he stands up and leaves the drawing room.
Man: Don’t forget
to cook later.
N (suddenly stand
up): Go to eat your ass!
5 INT. DRAWING ROOM
The man holds a
bloodied knife, and put it into a bowl of water. Strange thing is the knife
stand in the water. We can see a taoist magic figure beside the bowl.
Then, the man
lights 4 candles in front of the bowl. After that, he burns incense and says
something we can understand. Suddenly, he stops praying and open his eyes. 4
candles extinguish at the same time.
The man put some
ash into the bowl, and then he holds the knife and takes it out of the bowl. We
can see a spookiest smile on his face.
6 INT. DRAWING ROOM
N is cooking in
the kitchen. She hears the man is back.
The man walks into
the room, looks very strange.
N even doesn’t
look up, start cursing: Come back so late again! Fuck! You’re a pig that just
knows how to eat and fuck bitches! Why are you coming back? Why don’t you live
in that bitch’s home?
N curses a lot
while she is cooking. She doesn’t notices the man already stand behind her.
Unexpectedly, the man stabbed a knife in her back. We can see the knife
penetrate her body, shed blood like water. N stops talking this time, she looks
very suffering, but she can’t sound any voices.The man is deadpan this time.
Fade out
7 INT. DRAWING ROOM
Fade in:
N has been put
beside the sofa.
Man is still doing
his ritual. He drinks the water in the bowl, and spews all the water to the
taoist magic figure. Then, he walks to N’s body, and put the taoist magic
figure on her wound. He starts to pray for something, the taoist magic figure
slowly disappearing.
Man: Don’t forget
to cook later.
Suddenly, N’s body
became squirm. She stands up slowly. We can’t see any emotion on her face. She
just walks to the kitchen, doesn’t say anything.
8 EXT. STREET(OUTSIDE OF THE HOTEL)
Flashback: ( back
to no.3 scene )
The man and S walk
out of the hotel. We can see them, in a very close place.
Man’s hand put on
S’s posterior, looks very intimate. Actually, he put a taoist magic figure on
her back.
He is saying
something to S. Actually, he is praying.
Then the man pats
S lightly, the taoist magic figure has disappeared.
Man: Go back to
your home.
They separate.
Fade out.
The end.
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